Moose's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Red: A Morphmation]

Interesting, but your style needs work.

Definitely not bad. I actually enjoyed it. The whole abstract change of scene made it interesting, but you need to work on the individuality of your style. It's very basic and very similar to almost all beginners.

Also, the animation wasn't very smooth at some parts, like the box dropping on the ladybug, which could definitely been prevented by using more detail, like show the box flatten out and regroup a little when it hits the ground. Subtle stuff like that makes a flash really good.

Clayman2 responds:

Thanks! I didn't really take physics into consideratio there, but I should have. I do realize whta you're saying though, effects likethat give ach animator their character. Thanks for the tip, I'll be sure to remember it.

[Stickman makes a Change!]

It's ok

If you put music and sound effects in it, it would be really good.

Renegade-Hamster responds:

*hits head against the wall*

Authors comments! Do you ever read them?

[Bully Beaf]

Good for a school project

You just spelled stalking wrong.

You should also turn the volume up for the voices up a tad, but other than that, it was good.

Fpoon responds:

thank you i just updated it

[Mario's Mega Mushroom]

Ehh, just barely.

We've honestely had way too many sprite movies, but you used 3d ones, so it wasn't as bad. But seriously, stop doing sprite movies, especially if you want to do something good for Newgrounds.

[World In Between ~ Ep. 1]

Too easy.

As soon as you said "TURN YOUR VOLUME UP TO HEAR THE VOICES!" it was easy to predict.

Next time, don't mention it. People will tend to have their music on anyways.

HelloGoodbye responds:

urmama is 2 eezy

[Untitled-1.fla]

Very nice.

I loved it. Reminded me of the old Looney Toons where the animator messes with the person they're drawing. Classic, with a NG twist. Very cool idea, just wish it was longer.

Good job (and cool points for the Cowboy Bebop music).

RupeeClock responds:

Hey yeah, it is sort of like that.

[Foany]

That was really unique and awesome

Wow, for how short it was, it was really good. A little short though. Now for the review:

Graphics: Really really amazing job. It was so creepy, you definitely got the scary feel down. Great job

Animation: Good job as well. All of foamy's head tranistions were very nicely animated.

Sound: Some creepy backround music would be nice, and some better voices too, but the ending was very nice.

[Flecko 2]

Fantastic.

My god, that was the best thing I've seen in a while. I'm so glad I could work with you on this. Like someone else said, it's the small things that make an animation great, like the tail and the fat jiggling. It was purely amazing. It was also extremely funny. I loved how the director walked. I cracked up so hard when I saw that. Amazing job. Just one thing, did anyone else have trouble with the preloader? It's probably just my comp.