OK for a first try
OK, it was a good concept, but the scripting made it really hard to do anything.
Graphics: They were ok character designs. In the part with the bed in the first scene, it looked like the bed was almost on it's side, and during the specials, you have
Sound: It needed WAY more music and sound effects. All RPG's need backround music for when they walk around, fight music, and cutscene music. You only had 1. Also, it could definitely use voice actors.
Coding: OK, this needed a TON of work. First off, in the first scene, I could bareley walk outside. Also, it was really annoying having to click the text instead of just a box to do something, especially when the text is so small. So yea, a lot to work out. Also, it's really really really hard. Might want to get some beta-testers next time.
So, in short, you need to work a lot harder on the coding, but I would definitely like to see this after you've fixed all of the major problems with it, because it seems like a really original idea.