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[World In Between ~ Ep. 1]

Too easy.

As soon as you said "TURN YOUR VOLUME UP TO HEAR THE VOICES!" it was easy to predict.

Next time, don't mention it. People will tend to have their music on anyways.

HelloGoodbye responds:

urmama is 2 eezy

[Untitled-1.fla]

Very nice.

I loved it. Reminded me of the old Looney Toons where the animator messes with the person they're drawing. Classic, with a NG twist. Very cool idea, just wish it was longer.

Good job (and cool points for the Cowboy Bebop music).

RupeeClock responds:

Hey yeah, it is sort of like that.

["The Golden Mushroom"]

Best Sprite Movie Ever.

I saw this on the VAC before I saw it here, and I'm definitely not suprised it's doing so well. Usually, sprite movies are terrible and dull, especially mario movies, but yours was original and amazingly well animated. I'm not a huge fan of random hilarity, but in this case, I loved it. Great job. I loved the voice acting for this, you did a great job with the casting. Amazing. I loved it when wario and waluigi broke into dance (though I was hoping for some sort of zieg heil hand signal ^^). It was so randomly amazing. Great job, and I hope to see more of your work.

MajinPiccolo responds:

It wasn't meant to be random O_o

But thanks anyways. There "was" as story, in case you didn't know. lolol

[Giant Enemy Crab Battle]

Wow, Nice

What's sad is, I understood every joke you made. Absolutely every one. Should I cut myself now?

Steven-M responds:

Nah, just pat yourself on the back. When I get into full gear, the references can be insanely hard to find without a help list. Thanks for commenting!

[world war III (part 1)]

No sticks ever!!

Although the animation of the stick figures was good and sound was pretty good, the rest was bad. Here are some ways to improve:
1) Graphics: Draw your own stuff and don't use stick figures. Just outline the gun and draw the inside. It will look better. And never do stick figures. Even if the story and sound is good, it will always deteriorate the value of your animation.
2) Story: It was just 2 groups of 4 people shooting each other. Not much of a world war. You should probably of put some stuff in the beginning. It really helps to develop the plot, if there is one.

linksman11 responds:

if you hate sticks don't complain just dont watch!

[Ebola B Gone!]

I sympathize with you

I made a commercial not too long ago for a Teddy Roosevelt Action Figure. I hope it get's thourgh, but here are some things that would make it better. Actually, I'll tell you what you did good first:
1) Humor: This was really funny. I have to say, this made Ebola very humorous. You did a good job.
2) Graphics: Although the animation was choppy and not very good, the drawing was passable.
Now here's a list of improvements:
1) Audio: There is a program called Audacity(tm). Download it for free. Just go to google and look for it. It allows you to enhance your audio. It will help with the audio problems.
2) Backround Music: Goes along with audio. Download some music or something to put in the backround. It makes it 10 times more interesting. Don't ask me how, it just does.
Well good luck, I hope your ad won't get blammed like mine did (But hey, at least it beat IllWillPress)

DingoEatingFuzz responds:

Thanks on the props, and i might look into that audacity. Im using goldwave right now and it seems to be working fine, but its a trial, and bg music didnt even occur to me. Thanks.

ps. what doesnt beat illwill?

[MK : 3 Fatality Backfires]

Man that was good

That was awesome man, I hope it makes it through.

Jimbo-Limbo responds:

Heh, thanks a lot :-P

[DailySwoon1809233]

It blowed

Revrent's looked good, but was really wierd. The whole thing was random, wierd, and completely stupid. Next time, actually try having a theme instead of slapping random stuff together.

rexCo responds:

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[The History of VideoGames]

Nice

This was really good. The story was awesome, followed by decent animation and humor. Good job. I hope to see more from you. Though you may want to spend more time if you really want to make something good. I here some really good flash artists spend 4 or so months making one flash.

Snow-Fox responds:

sad part is i worked on that for about three, not every day though